Entry: Humble Companions Thursday, November 02, 2006



Humble Companions

Last night,
Venus and Orion
seeped through my stratosphere.
They dangled above me
like curious hummingbirds.
They spoke in glances.
They brushed my nose
with fiery kisses.

So modest in their station
are the planets and stars!
So genuine
and unassuming.
They glimmer lightly,
sporadically popping in
as if to say, "See how beautiful
we are."

But when your eyes meet them,
they boast nothing of themselves.
They only grin,
aware of their placid power
over the poets
and the dreamers.

They keep us from
filling the universe with
arrogant wordiness.
They never forget
the beauty of silence.

-ajs

   3 comments

manda
November 17, 2006   05:22 AM PST
 
hey. I was thinking that "brushed my nose with fiery kisses" is kind of.. off. Because "unassuming" and "glimmer[ing] lightly" contradicts "fiery kisses". But then what do i know? : )
Pareesha
November 5, 2006   01:43 AM PST
 
a writer named adam.

I am already drawn in.

I love poetry and the like. Very nice work here.
Sara
November 3, 2006   11:07 PM PST
 
I love it...simple and beautiful.

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