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Humble Companions Last night, So modest in their station But when your eyes meet them, They keep us from -ajs |
| manda November 17, 2006 05:22 AM PST hey. I was thinking that "brushed my nose with fiery kisses" is kind of.. off. Because "unassuming" and "glimmer[ing] lightly" contradicts "fiery kisses". But then what do i know? : ) | ||
| Pareesha November 5, 2006 01:43 AM PST a writer named adam. I am already drawn in. I love poetry and the like. Very nice work here. | ||
| Sara November 3, 2006 11:07 PM PST I love it...simple and beautiful. | ||
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