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Good Morning Cinnamon coffee At first, I thought it was But when my naked feet You make no guarantees, world. Stunning and unpredictable, You’re too beautiful to ignore, -ajs |
| Matt March 7, 2007 03:36 PM PST This one made me see you immediately. Crystal clear. I also saw myself. Nobody could ask more of a poem. You've got a little jewel in this one. | ||
| Pareesha January 11, 2007 07:18 AM PST I have read a lot of your blog too. But this poem... it's... it's... I feel if I comment on it I will take away meaning from it! haha, in all honesty, this is beautiful. I absolutely love it. | ||
| mych January 6, 2007 01:36 AM PST This is a very beautiful piece. It's like seeing oneself move with the world. | ||
| blue January 5, 2007 09:31 AM PST i love it!! Continue writing. c",) | ||
| Name January 4, 2007 06:16 AM PST Hmmm...what to say, I'm speachless it seems. Thank goodness for the generous amount of time offered through commenting. lol. I'll be truly honest and throw away pretence and say that I know nothing of peotry, a stanza only brings to mind seinfelds George costanza. I can not analyse it in any structural or methodical way that matters, so maybe this means nothing when I say that I have loved every single piece of your poetry and thought it brilliant. And this particular piece almost made me weep, it is soo beautiful. Yet from my gloomy perspective of the world also bittersweet. For a long time I have been blind to the beauty of the world and even began to doubt it ever existed but this poem convinces me that it is still out there. Thankyou And yes silly as it must seem to you I too (like chris) have read your entire blog back to front. In fact I believe you may have a silent fan club already building. Good luck with the novel, not that you need it. | ||
| Mary December 28, 2006 09:55 PM PST Wow. Adam, this is beautiful, effortlessly it seems. I think this is one of the best poems you've ever written (that I've read, that is). | ||
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